Question

假如你是李華，你代表你們班同學給你們學校新來的外籍教師Mr. Smith寫一封電子郵件，告訴他大家對他第一周教學的感受，內容包括：
1、大家對他的總體評價較高；
2、具有獨特的、使課堂生動活潑的方法；
3、知識淵博，且對學生很耐心；
4、就如何幫助英語基礎薄弱的學生，向他提一些建議（內容自擬）。
注意：1.電子郵件必須包括以上內容，可適當增加細節(jié)；
2. 詞數(shù)110左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。
Dear Mr. Smith，
On behalf of the students of our class, I email you telling you how we feel about your first-week teaching in our class.                                                          
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of the students of our class, I e-mail you telling you how we feel about your first-week teaching in our class. All of us students think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.
Some of us are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?
If you have any difficulties in your life here, just tell us. We are ready to offer you any help.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，給外教反應一周以來的感受，使用第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。要點文章都已經給了出來，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
【亮點說明】高級詞匯的運用是本文最大的亮點：介詞短語On behalf of 代表…；think highly of高度評價….；In addition而且；Frankly坦率地說；built up our confidence建立自信等等；在寫作的時候，我們要選擇合適的和文章內容相一致的高級詞匯讓我們的文章更有層次感。