Question

每到雙休時(shí)，有些同學(xué)不是充分地利用它來好好的調(diào)整自己，而是把時(shí)間用在上網(wǎng)或看電視上。很多家長(zhǎng)對(duì)這種情況 擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象寫一片短文，談?wù)勎覀冎袑W(xué)生應(yīng)該如何度過一個(gè)有意義的周末。
詞數(shù)：120左右。

Answer 1

Nowadays we students don’t have to learn at school at weekends. However, some students don’t know how to spend their weekends. They are seen sleeping late, surfing the Internet or watching TV as they like. What they do has caused their parents to be worried.
In my opinion, weekend is a good time for us to have a good rest. But as students, we may as well set aside some time to review what we have learned in school. I would like to arrange time like this: in the mornings, we should do our homework; in the afternoons, we can have sports or help with some housework, or even go shopping with our parents; in the evenings, we can watch TV or surf the Internet for a while.
In this way, we can lay a solid foundation for our future development and enjoy ourselves.

這是一篇開放性作文，并且給出一個(gè)話題，并且有部分的文字提示。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，并且句式要賦予變化，同時(shí)也在選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織尪個(gè)完整的整體。注意時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)較好，注意前后人稱保持一致，突出亮點(diǎn)，用好用對(duì)句型。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 范文中出現(xiàn)一些高級(jí)短語(yǔ)，in one’s opinion 在某人看來 have a rest 休息，help with 在某方面幫助某人，go shopping 購(gòu)物。What they do has caused their parents to be worried，用了what 引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。we may as well set aside some time to review what we have learned in school，may as well do sth 最好做某事，to do 做目的狀語(yǔ)。I would like to arrange time like this: in the mornings, we should do our homework; in the afternoons, we can have sports or help with some housework, or even go shopping with our parents; in the evenings, we can watch TV or surf the Internet for a while，用到了排比句，使文章很有條理。