Question

某英文報(bào)“陽(yáng)光體育、健康人生”欄目正在討論有關(guān)健康食品、體育鍛煉與少年兒童肥胖的問題。下面六幅圖畫是李明一年中的變化，請(qǐng)根據(jù)李明的情況寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右。
2．短文的開頭已給出。
提示詞語(yǔ)：
junk food好吃但不利于健康的食品
snacks各種零食 

2012.7

2013.9

A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖) ….
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Answer 1

One possible version:
A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖) among children. Take Li Ming for example. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, but a year ago, he fell into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. Besides, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. As a result, he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.
What a terrible thing! Li Ming felt so sorry that he decided to change the unhealthy life style, which had done great damage to his health, though a bit difficult. He began to take up a balanced and healthy diet, containing fruit and vegetables. He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming, skating, running and playing basketball. Several months later, Li Ming became as fit as before.
Luckily, Li Ming has broken away from his former way of life. His example shows that a healthy diet and regular exercise work to prevent obesity. Those who are facing the same problem, why not have a try?

試題分析：本文屬于看圖作文。要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；本文屬于記敘文，而且敘述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故使用一般過去時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本句中的連接詞使用較為合理，如besides, as a result等；同時(shí)本句中的高級(jí)句式也較多：he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise.和What a terrible thing!這個(gè)感嘆句；以及定語(yǔ)從句 Those who are facing the same problem, why not have a try?高級(jí)詞匯如：break away, obesity等等。