Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
A life without a goal is a life without hope.
注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名及班級名稱；
⑤詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

As John Ruskin puts it, “Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass”. Goals of life determine what we are going to be.
I used to be so addicted to computer games that I had little time for study and thus fell behind. My parents and teachers were greatly worried about me. It was what my English teacher said to me that helped me out. She told me hat I must have my own goal of life, otherwise my future would be hopeless and that playing computer games was fun but it wouldn’t guarantee me a bright future. I finally realized that I must set up a goal and work hard towards it right away. In the days that followed, whenever I felt tired or had an urge to play computer games, I thought of my goal and soon regain strength.
As the saying goes, a life without a goal is a life without hope. Bearing my goal of life in mind, I am always full of energy in my study.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語寫一篇短文。A life without a goal is a life without hope.需要寫的話題已經(jīng)給出，要求內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Goals of life determine what we are going to be.這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句； It was what my English teacher said to me that helped me out.這里含有一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句；I finally realized that I must set up a goal and work hard towards it right away.這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句。