Question

北京教育考試學(xué)院于10月21日公布2016年高考英語學(xué)科總分值由150分降到100分。這件事情引起了人們的熱議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇英文報(bào)道。

贊成	有助于減輕學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，更好學(xué)習(xí)其它科目。同時(shí)，英語的提高可在大學(xué)。
反對(duì)	英語是國(guó)際語言，是了解世界的重要工具，與世界接軌，必須強(qiáng)化英語學(xué)習(xí)。
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

 注意： 1）開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2）不要逐條翻譯，但可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容以便行文連貫。
3）詞數(shù)在120左右。
On October 21st, Beijing Educational Examination Yuan declared that in Beijing the total score of English in the 2016 College Entrance Examination would be declined from 150 to 100, which arouses a heated discussion…
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Answer 1

On October 21st, Beijing Educational Examination Yuan declared that in Beijing the total score of English in the 2016 College Entrance Examination will be declined from 150 to 100, which arouses a heated discussion. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people think the policy will contribute to reduce the study pressure of the high school students, providing students with more time to learn other subjects especially our mother language Chinese. Additionally, a good command of English can be achieved in university instead of at high school. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion that since English has become an international language, that is, a practical language tool, English learning must be strengthened to keep pace with other developed countries during the economical and cultural globalization age.
As for me, I strongly support the former idea. As is known to us ,English is widely used in international business negotiation and conference. However, not all of us but some talents have the opportunity to get involved in them. Thus it is unnecessary for each student to devote most valuable time to it . Moreover, the score decline doesn’t mean we totally ignore English, but does adjust the model of English teaching and learning . Hopefully ,the policy will benefit our English learners.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些比較常見的短語instead of代替而不是； that is 也就是說On the other hand 另一方面；As is known to 眾所周知；devote time to 專心于某事。Some people think the policy will contribute to reduce the study pressure of the high school students, providing students with more time to learn other subjects especially our mother language Chinese這個(gè)句子中providing表示伴隨狀語，provide sb with sth 提供某人某物。As is known to us ,English is widely used in international business negotiation and conference這個(gè)句子中as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，widely用來修飾動(dòng)詞used.