Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.
注意：1. 無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
2. 除詩歌外，文體不限；
3. 文中不得透露個人姓名和班級名稱；
4. 詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.
However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.
Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：lie in 在于， in the process of 在…過程中，dreamed of夢想，stick to堅持，make it成功， Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 這句話用了定語從句， Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 這句話用了主語從句，However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 這句話用了表語從句， Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.這句話用了讓步狀語從句�？傊�，范文使用大量高中教材中出現(xiàn)的高級短語和句型，考生應(yīng)該能做到學以致用。