Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)在英國(guó)工作，你的朋友王平寫信告訴你他打算赴英留學(xué)，想知道初到英國(guó)可能會(huì)遇到的困難。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封回信，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1. 可能會(huì)遇到的困難：語(yǔ)言方面的障礙、飲食的不習(xí)慣、想家、孤獨(dú)等；
2. 鼓勵(lì)他并表示愿意幫助他。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100字左右。   
2. 信的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here
in the UK. ____________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Ping,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about the difficulties you may meet with when you get here in UK. Now, I’d like to tell you something about it.
First, you may have problems about the language which you think you have learned so well. You may find it difficult to communicate with the natives, because many of them have a strong accent. Besides, you may not get used to the western food here or even hate to have it. What’s more, you may feel lonely and miss your family and friends, especially in the very beginning.
However, you needn’t worry about it. Several weeks later, you will get used to everything here and get to love the place, and I’ll also try my best to help you when necessary.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：題目要求給朋友王平寫一封回信，告訴他初到英國(guó)可能會(huì)遇到的困難有哪些，并提出愿意幫助他度過(guò)困難。題目是常見(jiàn)的書信作文，寫作時(shí)，首先要注意書信的格式要正確，不能出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)方面的錯(cuò)誤。注意使用第一人稱來(lái)寫；注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用，不能出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了較多的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：固定句型I’d like to..., find it difficult to communicate with..., try my best to help you；定語(yǔ)從句which you think you have learned so well；原因狀語(yǔ)從句because many of them have a strong accent；省略when necessary等，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底；
范文還注意使用First, Besides, What’s more, However等連接句子和上下文，做到了語(yǔ)意連貫、銜接緊密；
范文也使用了一些短語(yǔ)get used to；worry about等。