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據(jù)報道,我國學(xué)生近視率居世界第一。造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因是多方面的, 請你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 為題, 寫一篇英語短文。
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1. 造成學(xué)生近視的原因；
2. 如何保護(hù)視力？
注意: 1.詞數(shù)120左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫；
3.短文的開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯: 近視率 rate of myopia
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?
It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?
　　It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.
The causes of myopia are complicated. Firstly, too much homework leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep. Long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight. Secondly, medical research shows genetic factors also contribute to poor eyesight. In addition, many students don’t form good eye care habits. For example, when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.
　　Realizing the reasons of this result, it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. I think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，寫的是根據(jù)我國學(xué)生近視率居世界第一這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行分析，主要包括以下兩個方面：1. 造成學(xué)生近視的原因；2. 如何保護(hù)視力？
【亮點說明】
文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如：be ranked  as 名列。。。，，lead to ,導(dǎo)致 ，contribute to 有助于，導(dǎo)致，還有加分的句型：Long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight.（ it做形式賓語），when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.（狀語從句的省略），it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight（it’s time to do sth 該做某事了）并且主語了句子的銜接如：firstly…… secondly ……in addition….. 用于列舉近視的原因，for example 例如，用于舉例說明 ，等。