Question

近日，紀(jì)錄片《舌尖上的中國(guó)》在央視播出后，迅速走紅網(wǎng)絡(luò)。該片不僅展現(xiàn)了中國(guó)的各種美味佳肴，同時(shí)也深入探討了諸多美食所體現(xiàn)出的處世哲學(xué)和社會(huì)變遷。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

你對(duì)中國(guó)美食的理解：	1.中國(guó)美食歷史悠久,蜚聲國(guó)際。
	2.中國(guó)美食食材豐富，制作精良。
	3.中國(guó)美食的主要組成。
	……
俗話(huà)說(shuō)，”人如其食”。請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷和感想，提出兩三點(diǎn)中國(guó)美食對(duì)社會(huì)、生活或文化等方面的影響。

Answer 1

As is widely acknowledged,Chinese food has a long history and is well received internationally. Eating is a highly important feature of China’s culture. With several thousand years of creative efforts, the intelligent and hardworking Chinese people have been able to employ an endless variety of natural ingredients and cooking methods in making Chinese food, which may well account for the universal popularity of Chinese restaurants and Chinese food overseas. A meal in China often consists of main food-typically rice or noodles-and accompanying dishes, such as vegetables, meat, and fish. As for the cooking methods the Chinese people usually use, frying, baking and boiling are among the very common.
As a saying goes,”you are what you eat”, In my opinion, food is always connected with people, reflecting their different living situations and attitudes. Besides, many Chinese people value the time when the families or friends can get together communicating and sharing good memories.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：要求根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于中國(guó)美食的短文，提綱是以表格的形式給出，已經(jīng)很具體了，但是有的內(nèi)容還要考生自己充實(shí)，提綱類(lèi)作文寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，但是要點(diǎn)都覆蓋了，用了一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)： account for 占據(jù)，是…原因，consists of 由…組成，As for 至于，還有一些語(yǔ)法知識(shí)和句型：As is widely acknowledged,Chinese food has a long history and is well received internationally. 這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， With several thousand years of creative efforts, the intelligent and hardworking Chinese people have been able to employ an endless variety of natural ingredients and cooking methods in making Chinese food, which may well account for the universal popularity of Chinese restaurants and Chinese food overseas. 這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， In my opinion, food is always connected with people, reflecting their different living situations and attitudes. 這句話(huà)用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，As a saying goes,”you are what you eat文章還用了諺語(yǔ)。此外范文還使用了 Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。