Question

進(jìn)入高一以來(lái)，同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)壓力更大了。最近，你班同學(xué)針對(duì)怎樣過(guò)周末進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹同學(xué)們的不同觀(guān)點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />1.有些人認(rèn)為：周末聽(tīng)該好好放松；2.有些人認(rèn)為：應(yīng)該利用周末好好學(xué)習(xí)； 3.你的看法。
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。

Answer 1

Since we entered Grade three we students feel greater stress. Recently , we had a discussion about how we spend our weekends. We have different opinions.
Some of us say we should spend our weekends on our lessons because examination are more and more frequent. If we work hard at our lessons. We are expected to get good scores in the exams.
However, others argue that we should try to relax ourselves at weekends because we are tired after studying hard for a week. It is obvious that a good rest makes us feel refreshed.
As far as I am concerned , it is necessary for us to relax at weekends. But working on our lessons is equally important.

本文是議論文，關(guān)于怎么度過(guò)周末，有正反正兩種觀(guān)點(diǎn)，并注意談?wù)勛约旱目捶ㄅc建議。作文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出分段分別論述所給的要點(diǎn)，注意作文的連貫性，做到自然流暢。最好用第一人稱(chēng)處一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇的句式要賦予變化，并選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織連接起來(lái)組成一個(gè)整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中使用了很多高級(jí)短語(yǔ)，如 spend …on 花費(fèi)時(shí)間在某事上study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)，be expected to 期望著做某事， as far as one be concerned 就某人而言，使作文嶺充實(shí)而不單調(diào)。范文中還運(yùn)用較多的語(yǔ)法知識(shí) 像賓語(yǔ)從句we had a discussion about how we spend our weekends，it is adj for sb to do . ，，句型等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)掌握牢固。同時(shí)范文還注意使用連接詞如 however ,but 等。再表示觀(guān)點(diǎn)時(shí)用 some  ….others …. 的表達(dá)結(jié)構(gòu),使觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)立明顯，層次分明。還運(yùn)用了些高級(jí)詞匯如recently , examination,score,argue , concerned,equally , important。最后的總結(jié)部分用But working on our lessons is equally important.動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，豐富句子的類(lèi)型。