Question

期中考試后，為了相互溝通，提高學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)。學(xué)校將召開(kāi)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勍瑢W(xué)們對(duì)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)的看法。
要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 大部分同學(xué)贊同并陳述他們的理由。（至少寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)）
2. 少部分同學(xué)不贊同并陳述他們的理由。
3. 你的觀點(diǎn)及理由。
要求：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。      2. 詞數(shù)：100左右。
After the mid-term examination, a parents’ meeting will be held in our school.
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       

Answer 1

Parents’ meetings are often held in schools in order to have a contact with the school and teachers and improve the students’ study, but different people have different ideas. A few days ago a parents’ meeting was held in our school and here are our views on parents’ meetings.
Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. What is more, parents can get some good advice and useful information from teachers. On the contrary, a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school.
In my opinion, to understand children better, parents should keep in touch with teachers, so parents’ meetings are quite necessary.

試題分析：本篇寫(xiě)作題材是對(duì)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；和自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，句式多變：Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. 這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school. 這句話(huà)用了同位語(yǔ)從句， to understand children better, parents should keep in touch with teachers, so parents’ meetings are quite necessary.這句話(huà)用了目的狀語(yǔ)。還有范文使用了What is more, On the contrary, In my opinion,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。