Question

假如你是李華。你的外籍教師Mr. Brown想讓其五歲的兒子學(xué)
漢語(yǔ)，他你發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)去你市那所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)更好。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以
下提示給他回一封郵件，推薦育英語(yǔ)言學(xué)校。
1．該校有20余年的對(duì)外漢語(yǔ)教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；
2．接受不同教育程度和背景的學(xué)生
3．教學(xué)內(nèi)容豐富，授課方式生動(dòng)靈活。
Dear Mr. Brown，
                                                                                         
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m very glad to know that you want your 5-year-old son to learn Chinese. Here I’d like to introduce you a well-known language school in our city. Yu Ying Language School.
The language school, which has over twenty years of experience in teaching foreign students Chinese, accept students from all over the world, regardless of their educational level and background. The school curriculum includes Chinese culture, everyday communication, written and spoken Chinese. All the teachers there have developed a special method so that they can make their classes interesting and lively. Many foreign students can use Chinese freely when leaving school.
If you need to know anything else, do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua

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