Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
The Use of Examinations
A good education should make people think for themselves. But the exam can never do anything like that.
First, examinations are second to none because it brings anxiety to students. As soon as a child begins school, he enters a world of terrible competition.
Second, exams do not interest students to read or to learn widely. They do not help students to look for more and more knowledge, but try to put as much as possible into the students’ head.
Third, they lower the standards of teaching, for they do not give any freedom to teachers to decide what to teach. Teachers themselves have no choice but to train their students in exam techniques. The most successful students are not always the best educated but the best trained in the technique of exams.
Fourth, they can tell you nothing about a person’s true ability. The exams are often nothing more than a subjective assessment(主觀評價) by some examiners.
However, if there are no exams, few students or even no one will do any revision or study!
【寫作內(nèi)容】
概括短文的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的詞數(shù)大約30；
就“中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)成績與能力的相互關(guān)系”為題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包括以下的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的詞數(shù)大約120。
(1) 你每次考試之前的心情如何？
你是如何備考的?
你認(rèn)為考試成績能反映你的學(xué)習(xí)能力嗎？
【寫作要求】
你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的觀點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確、語言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適、篇章連貫。

Answer 1

Exams make students feel nervous and can neither show students’ true abilities nor help them to learn more knowledge. To deal with exams, teachers have to train students in exam techniques.
Before exams I am always full of anxiety. Most of the time I can’t help thinking about the exams, which make me sleep badly. I know it is not good for exams, but I have no way to control myself.
During the day when I am preparing for exams, I try my best to go over all the lessons we have learned and at the mean time, I carefully review all the notes that were taken in the classes.
I think the result of exams can reflect our ability to learn to some extent. Exams can force or encourage us to study hard. We obtain various knowledge by studying different kinds of subjects. Knowledge is power and this power can help us to develop our ability to learn.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】范文概括精當(dāng)，觀點明確，不乏好的詞組和句子，如：neither …nor….，既不，也不，full of anxiety 充滿焦慮，have no way to do沒有辦法做…，to some extent到某些程度，To deal with exams, teachers have to train students in exam techniques.這句話用了目的狀語， Most of the time I can’t help thinking about the exams, which make me sleep badly. 這句話用了定語從句，During the day when I am preparing for exams, I try my best to go over all the lessons we have learned and at the mean time, I carefully review all the notes that were taken in the classes. 這句話用了定語從句， Knowledge is power and this power can help us to develop our ability to learn.這句話用了諺語。