Question

昨晚，本市的一座辦公樓發(fā)生火災(zāi)。假設(shè)你是一名校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)為校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，介紹火災(zāi)情況。
時(shí)間：昨晚9點(diǎn)
火情：1. 火焰夾雜黑色濃煙從六樓冒出
2. 有煤氣罐（gas tank）爆炸聲 (explosion)
3. 據(jù)說(shuō)大火從一樓開(kāi)始逐漸轉(zhuǎn)到樓頂
4. 一些窗戶(hù)和磚墻因?yàn)榛馂?zāi)的高溫而倒塌
死亡：無(wú)死亡發(fā)生
救援：1. 許多消防隊(duì)員和消防車(chē)（ fire engines）迅速趕到
2. 花了近兩個(gè)小時(shí)才把火撲滅
注意：1. 有標(biāo)題
2 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；      3. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右

Answer 1

A Terrible Fire
A big fire happened in one office building in our city at about nine o’clock last night.
In the beginning, we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the sixth floor; and we also heard the explosion of the gas tank. It was said that the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, and finally reached the top floor.
Some windows and brick walls were burnt down because of the heat of the fire. Many people stood outside on the streets watching the fire in horror. Many firemen and fore engines came quickly. Luckly, there was no person in the office building when the fire broke out. It took about two hours for the fireman to put out the big fire.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這篇作文的提綱很詳細(xì)，關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中用了詞組：burn down燒毀， because of因?yàn)�，in horror.驚恐的，break out爆發(fā)， In the beginning,和一些復(fù)雜的句型： we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the sixth floor; and we also heard the explosion of the gas tank.這句話(huà)用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。 It was said that the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, and finally reached the top floor.這句話(huà)用了固定句型It was said that和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Luckly, there was no person in the office building when the fire broke out. 這句話(huà)用現(xiàn)在分詞做定語(yǔ)，It took about two hours for the fireman to put out the big fire.這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)。