Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（25分）
2008年5月12日汶川大地震帶來(lái)的傷痛讓國(guó)人永遠(yuǎn)銘記在心。傷亡人數(shù)眾多，房屋倒塌，大量的民眾無(wú)家可歸。五年過(guò)去了，一個(gè)新汶川重新展現(xiàn)在世人的面前。近日某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社舉辦主題為“New Wenchuan, Great Changes”的征文大賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供圖片寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

Answer 1

New Wenchuan, Great Changes
On May 12, 2008 a great earthquake struck Wenchuan where many houses were destroyed and thousands of people lost their lives in a short time. Almost everything was in ruins.
Luckily, all the people from our country gave a helpful hand to the people who were in trouble. Great changes have taken place in Wenchuan in the past three years. The brave people in Wenchuan have done their best to rebuild their own hometown. Lots of buildings have been put up and students go to their new schools to study happily. You’ll find a new beautiful Wenchuan while visiting here!

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，反映汶川的重建問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作前對(duì)圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行仔細(xì)分析，包括英語(yǔ)提示，了解圖畫(huà)想要表達(dá)的主旨，用自己的語(yǔ)言陳述觀點(diǎn)和理由，需要注意緊扣文章主題，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文使用了詞組：in ruins“成為廢墟”，in trouble“有困難”，take place“發(fā)生”，do their best to“盡力做…”， put up“建立”，句型也多變：On May 12, 2008 a great earthquake struck Wenchuan where many houses were destroyed and thousands of people lost their lives in a short time. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句。Luckily, all the people from our country gave a helpful hand to the people who were in trouble. 這句話也用了定語(yǔ)從句， You’ll find a new beautiful Wenchuan while visiting here!這句話用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略句。