Question

某英文報(bào)社準(zhǔn)備刊發(fā)一篇題為“Living in the City”的有關(guān)城市生活利和弊的文章，根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)100左右的短文，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Advantages	Disadvantages
找工作容易	生活消費(fèi)高
交通便利	人口多，擁擠
有公園、飯店等休閑場(chǎng)所	空氣污染，居住環(huán)境差

（說(shuō)明：書(shū)面表達(dá)必須采用如下標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答題卡，并引導(dǎo)考生養(yǎng)成規(guī)范答題習(xí)慣）

Answer 1

Living in the City
Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages.
It is often easier to find jobs. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.
However, living in the city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job; otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What’s more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：要求寫(xiě)一篇題為“Living in the City”的有關(guān)城市生活利和弊的文章，寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，這篇文章的要點(diǎn)是以表格的形式給出的，要點(diǎn)很詳細(xì)，考生只要靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文一個(gè)很大的亮點(diǎn)是句式多變：Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages.這句話是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)， It is often easier to find jobs. 這句話是it做形式主語(yǔ)， there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see.這句話用了不定式做定語(yǔ)， You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， You must find a well-paid job; otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句。另外，范文還使用了Besides, However, What’s more,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。