Question

據(jù)報(bào)道，某超市在中秋節(jié)后推出月餅盒換雞蛋的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你就此事用英語寫一篇短文，向校英文報(bào)的Environment 專欄投稿。
內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 商品包裝帶來環(huán)境問題；   
2. 此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)帶來的好處；
3. 你對(duì)回收利用的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；   2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；  3. 開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
It is reported that a supermarket has offered to exchange one empty moon cake box for three eggs.
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Answer 1

It is reported that a supermarket has offered to exchange one empty moon cake box for three eggs. This is an excellent plan with many benefits for everyone.
It has been generally accepted for years that packing causes huge problems for both people and the environment. Moon cake boxes are a good example because after people eat the cakes they just throw the boxes away. Some people place the boxes carefully in bins but others just dump them in the street without thinking about the pollution they are causing.
The supermarket’s offer makes a difference in many ways. Customers will get something almost free of charge, the supermarket can recycle the packaging, and the environment will suffer less rubbish.
The problems caused by packaging are serious. Offers like this, which involve recycling, are an effective way of dealing with them.

試題分析：題目要求用英語寫一篇短文，向校英文報(bào)Environment專欄投稿。寫作可以從三方面著手，包裝帶來環(huán)境問題；回收包裝的好處；自己的看法。寫作注意條理性，注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)和語法等的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了很多重要語法知識(shí)，如：主語從句It has been generally accepted that...，原因狀語從句because after people eat the cakes...，定語從句they are causing和which involve recycling，非謂語動(dòng)詞caused by packaging等；語法知識(shí)掌握扎實(shí)。
范文還使用了短語both...and，makes a difference，in many ways，free of charge，an effective way of，deal with等，做到了熟練運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)。