Question

今年雙十一，天貓商城總銷(xiāo)售額達(dá)350億，這相當(dāng)于王府井百貨所有門(mén)店一年的總銷(xiāo)售額。請(qǐng)你圍繞此現(xiàn)象，從以下三個(gè)方面，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
1. 此現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明的問(wèn)題
產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）
3. 你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：天貓商城 Tmall               銷(xiāo)售額sales            十億 billion
This year, on 11 November, __________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

This year, on 11 November, the sales of Tmall reached 35 billion yuan, which equals the total sales of all the Wangfujing Department stores for a whole year. It shows that the way people buy and sell things is changing and online shopping is becoming increasingly popular.
The reason why people are crazy shopping online are as follows. For one thing, people can buy whatever they want at a much lower price online and all this can be done by just click on the mouse. For another, it has become a trend for people to buy things on this special day, so you may find yourself out of date if you don’t do the same.
In my opinion, while online shopping offers us a lower price and a wider variety, we should always buy things we really want and avoid wasting money.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：圍繞雙十一的現(xiàn)象，從三個(gè)方面，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，這篇文章的提綱很詳細(xì)，根據(jù)所給提綱，以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】This year, on 11 November, the sales of Tmall reached 35 billion yuan, which equals the total sales of all the Wangfujing Department stores for a whole year.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， It shows that the way people buy and sell things is changing and online shopping is becoming increasingly popular.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句,      The reason why people are crazy shopping online are as follows.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， people can buy whatever they want at a much lower price online and all this can be done by just click on the mouse.這句話用了whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句， it has become a trend for people to buy things on this special day, so you may find yourself out of date if you don’t do the same. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， while online shopping offers us a lower price and a wider variety, we should always buy things we really want and avoid wasting money. 這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還使用了For one thing, For another, In my opinion,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。