Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society.
Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies，so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems. In addition, others agree that they should have some friends who can listen to them attentively and share their bitterness and joy.
What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.T o make friends, we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances. Besides, we need to be friendly and care about them.When disagreement does occur, it's wise of us to talk it over to others. In brief, making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves.
Yours ever,
Li Hua
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【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文出現(xiàn)很多好的句型：Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.這句話用了賓語從句，As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句， Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies，so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. 這句話用了定語從句和虛擬語氣，Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.這句話用了過去分詞做定語，Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems.這句話用了讓步狀語從句， What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.這句話用了主語從句和表語從句，To make friends, we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances.這句話用了目的狀語， When disagreement does occur, it's wise of us to talk it over to others. 這句話用了it做形式主語，making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves. 這句話用了動名詞做主語，還有范文還使用了In addition, Besides, In brief,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
