Question

假設(shè)你是一名班長，學期結(jié)束時老師要你給同學們用英語作簡短的評價，班里的林華同學這個學期以來變化很大。根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇短文。

過去	學習不努力，經(jīng)常與同學吵架； 亂扔垃圾，經(jīng)常打電腦游戲到深夜。
現(xiàn)在	自從老師找他談話以后有了較大改變。 與同學相處融洽，愛護校園和班級環(huán)境。 參加各類活動。
希望	……

注意：1. 短文須包括所給的內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
　　　2. 詞數(shù)90個左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
We are glade that Lin Hua has improved a lot this term
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Answer 1

We are glad Lin Hua has improved a lot this term. As we all know, he didn’t study hard and always quarreled with his classmates in the past. He used to throw about rubbish. He often played computer games till very late at night. However, he has changed a lot since our teacher talked to him. Now he gets along well with his classmates and takes good care of the environment in our school and our classroom. He enjoys taking part in all kinds of activities. We all hope that he will behave better in the future.

試題分析：考察提綱類短文。本文話題是林華現(xiàn)在與過去的變化，要特別注意時態(tài)，現(xiàn)在的情況使用一般現(xiàn)在時，過去的情況使用一般過去時。要點基本上都以及給出，考生應該用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達，要嘗試用復合句，如定語從句、同位語從句等，但句式不要單一，要形式多樣，要使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間，段與段之間過渡自然。在寫作過程中牢牢記住以下口訣：“先讀提示，要點與格式要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要當心，前后呼應要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別忽視”�？忌�在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文。
【亮點說明】：本文中使用了一些高級句式：As we all know這是一個非限制性定語從句。He often played computer games till very late at night.中狀語從句的運用也很到位。高級的短語也較多，如quarrel with；used to；get along well with等等。連詞的使用不求多，但求實用。