Question

假如你叫李華，高中開學(xué)已經(jīng)兩個月了，請根據(jù)下表寫一封電子郵件告知你的朋友張寧有關(guān)你新學(xué)校的一些情況。詞數(shù)：100左右。

學(xué)校概況	6，000多名學(xué)生，88個班級，500多名教職員工
班級情況	高一485班；70名學(xué)生，其中40名男生，30名女生
班主任	一位女老師，教英語，心地善良，工作嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)
學(xué)習(xí)科目	語文，數(shù)學(xué)，英語等

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Ning,
I have been here for two months . Everything here is going well. There are over 6,000 students and 88 classes with more than 500 teachers and staff in our school. The teachers in our school are all enthusiastic and work very hard. We have Chinese, Math and English classes, etc. I’m in Class 485, Grade 1.There are 70 students including 40 boys and 30 girls in my class. Our English teacher is our head teacher. She is very kind but strict and serious about her work. We all think that she is a great teacher. I’ll do my best in all my subjects. I hope you can come to my new school to have a look.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，句式簡潔但是富有變化：Everything here is going well. 這句話用了詞組go well“進(jìn)展順利”，There are over 6,000 students and 88 classes with more than 500 teachers and staff in our school. 這句話有with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， There are 70 students including 40 boys and 30 girls in my class.這句話用了介詞including的用法， She is very kind but strict and serious about her work. We all think that she is a great teacher. 這句話用了賓語從句， I hope you can come to my new school to have a look. 這句話用了定語從句。