Question

假定你是李華，上時發(fā)現(xiàn)有外籍教師在絡上輔導英語口語，因此發(fā)帖向在線外籍教師Peter尋求幫助。要點包括：
1．自我介紹（姓名、身份及年級）；
2．英語學習情況、困難及感受：
3．請求給予幫助。
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；
2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3開頭和結束語已為你寫好。
Dear Peter,
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,a senior student from China, I’m very happy to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral English on line along with your contact information . So I can’t wait to post this message to you .
I’ve learnt a lot from my school teachers in the past six years and known about three thousand English words and some basic grammar. I can do some reading and writing in English now. but I still have difficulty in listening and speaking .I always feel nervous when talking with native speakers.
That’s why I am writing to you. It would be nice if you could do me a favor. I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題解析：本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，發(fā)帖向在線外籍教師Peter尋求幫助在網(wǎng)絡上輔導英語口語，主要包括： 1．要點：自我介紹（姓名、身份及年級）；英語學習情況、困難及感受；請求給予幫助。2.人稱：使用第一人稱為主；3.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；4.注意使用一些連詞或插入語使文章表達自然、流暢；5.使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次。
【亮點說明】
文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如So I can’t wait to post this message to you .（can’t wait to do sth,迫不及待地做某事），I still have difficulty in listening and speaking .（have difficulty in doing sth，做某事有困難）That’s why I am writing to you.（That’s why ….名詞性從句，那是…的原因），I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.（look forward to + doing 期待著做某事）。