Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇題為“My New English Teacher” 的短文，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)在100左右。
李老師留給我的第一印象是年輕、漂亮、熱情、有活力；
她講授清楚，有耐心，并且總是鼓勵(lì)我們，因此同學(xué)們都積極參與英語(yǔ)課堂。
她教我們兩個(gè)多月，已經(jīng)成為最受我們歡迎的老師。
在李老師的幫助下，我們一定能在英語(yǔ)上取得更大的進(jìn)步。

Answer 1

My New English Teacher
Mrs Li has left a very good first impression on me. She is a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and full of energy. Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher. She explains everything clearly and is very patient with us. She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class.
So far, Mrs Li has been teaching us for only two weeks, but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class! I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us.

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語(yǔ)提示較多的記敘文。文章的難度較小，基本是按照要求翻譯句子內(nèi)容。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全；（1）李老師留給我的第一印象是年輕、漂亮、熱情、有活力；
（2）她講授清楚，有耐心，并且總是鼓勵(lì)我們，因此同學(xué)們都積極參與英語(yǔ)課堂。（3）她教我們兩個(gè)多月，已經(jīng)成為最受我們歡迎的老師。（4） 在李老師的幫助下，我們一定能在英語(yǔ)上取得更大的進(jìn)步。2.人稱(chēng)：使用第三人稱(chēng)為主；3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4.注意使用一些連詞或插入語(yǔ)使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢；5.使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用了從句：She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class. I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us. 插入語(yǔ)So far。