Question

人類已經(jīng)進(jìn)入一個嶄新的世紀(jì)，不同的人有不同的幸福觀。某學(xué)生英文報正組織中學(xué)生進(jìn)行幸福觀的討論，
請你根據(jù)下表的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己的觀點，以便向該刊投稿。

Students	Possessions（財產(chǎn)）	Benefits
some	money	buying and doing anything
some	health	enjoyment
many	wealth from parents	less work

注意：
1． 必須闡明自己的觀點以及對個別觀點的看法;
2． 不能照抄表中內(nèi)容；
3． 注意行文流暢；
4． 詞數(shù)120左右；
5． 題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Happiness
Happiness means different things to different people.   ________________________________
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Answer 1

 
One possible version：
Happiness
Happiness means different things to different people. For example, some students believe that if they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money. Some students think that they should be in good health, and do whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.
I don’t agree with the above points. I don’t think money means happiness. We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health, happiness and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求根據(jù)圖表提示信息講述人們不同的幸福觀，以及表達(dá)自己的看法，所以從文章結(jié)構(gòu)上可以采用兩段式，一段寫別人的看法，一段寫自己的觀點。其次，因為圖表提示信息較少，所以要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，補充足夠內(nèi)容。而且在寫作時還要注意連接詞的使用，以使文章表述自然流暢，上下銜接自然。此外，在時態(tài)方面要注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時。
【亮點說明】作者在文章開頭提出中心，然后用三個相似的句式some students believe that；Some students think that；Many students wish to介紹了三種不同的幸福觀，語言流暢自然。在第二段作者講述了自己對幸福的看法，反駁了以上錯誤的觀點。這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)布局不僅把要點全面展示出來，而且使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，條理分明。此外，賓語從句that if they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy；定語從句,which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.讓步狀語從句Although different people value happiness differently, 等多種句式的運用也使文章亮點紛呈。