Question

你是李強(qiáng)。你收到了你在英國(guó)的筆友Charlie來信，他在信中詢問你的暑假計(jì)劃，請(qǐng)就你的暑假計(jì)劃給他寫一封回信。
去鄉(xiāng)下看望祖父母，時(shí)間為一個(gè)星期。
去電腦培訓(xùn)中心學(xué)電腦，時(shí)間為一個(gè)星期。
讀一些英語書籍，但不知該讀哪些，請(qǐng)對(duì)方提些建議。
表示收到來信的心情；向?qū)Ψ礁改竼柡茫?br />盼望復(fù)信。

Answer 1

Dear Charlie，
How are you. I’m happy to receive your letter. My summer vocation will start at the end of June and end in middle of August. Now I’ll tell you about my plan for my summer vacation.
I plan to visit my grandparents who live in the country during my summer vacation. I miss them very much. Besides, I will spend a week taking a summer course in the computer, hoping it will help improve my computer study. What’s more, I would like to read more books. But I don’t know what to read.  I’d appreciate it if you are kind enough to give me some suggestions. So I think I will have a busy and colorful summer vocation. By the way, remember me to your parents.
What about your plan for holiday? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Qiang

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文：要求你給你在英國(guó)的筆友Charlie寫一封回信。告知你的暑假計(jì)劃，，要點(diǎn)給的很全面細(xì)致，因此考生首先要根據(jù)所給提綱和要點(diǎn)，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 I plan to visit my grandparents who live in the country during my summer vacation.這句話用了定語從句， I will spend a week taking a summer course in the computer, hoping it will help improve my computer study.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， But I don’t know what to read.這句話用了疑問詞+不定式，  I’d appreciate it if you are kind enough to give me some suggestions. 這句話用了it做形式主語，還有文章還使用 Besides, What’s more,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。