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以前人們進行遠距離交流的唯一途徑是寫信，可是隨著科技進步，人們在傳遞信息方面有了更多的選擇。特別是近年來，隨著電話的普及，動手寫信的人越來越少了，于是有人認為電話終會代替寫信，請你展開想象力，以Will Phones Kill Letter Writing為題寫一篇作文來闡述自己的觀點。要求合理想象，論證充分。詞數(shù)100左右。
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing
                                                                    
                                                                    

Answer 1

Will Phones Kill Letter Writing
Nowadays，we speak so much and write so little that  some people begin to suspect that phones will replace letter writing. However widely used it is today，I don't think the phone will take the place of letters.
There are at least two reasons why this will not happen. For one thing, although phones have already taken over many roles traditionally played by the letter, there are certain areas  in  which  black  and  white  sincerity  and confirmation is still a must. For another, in no way can a quick phone conversation convey as much as a well ­worded letter does.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)了一些高級短語：take the place of 代替，take over接管，還有復(fù)雜的多變的句型：we speak so much and write so little that  some people begin to suspect that phones will replace letter writing.這句話用了so…that句型， However widely used it is today，I don't think the phone will take the place of letters.這句話用了讓步狀語從句， There are at least two reasons why this will not happen. 這句話用了定語從句，although phones have already taken over many roles traditionally played by the letter, there are certain areas  in  which  black  and  white  sincerity  and confirmation is still a must. 這句話用了定語從句，in no way can a quick phone conversation convey as much as a well ­worded letter does. 這句話是倒裝句，還有文章還使用了For one thing, For another這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。