Question

在很多公眾場(chǎng)合，我們都可以看到“中式英文”（Chinglish）的標(biāo)識(shí)，我們是否應(yīng)該徹底清理這些 Chinglish 呢？請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面信息，以“Should We Get Rid of Chinglish?”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 贊成 1.外國(guó)人很難看懂。2.我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英文。 反對(duì) 1.“中式英文”豐富了英語(yǔ)本身。2.“中式英文”為我們的生活增添了樂(lè)趣。 你的觀點(diǎn) ？ 

Answer 1

Nowadays Chinglish signs can be seen in many public places, especially in big cities. People have different opinions on whether we should get rid of Chinglish.
On one hand, some people are in favor of getting rid of it. They think it is difficult for foreigners to understand those Chinglish signs. What’s more, we should learn standard English.
However, on the other hand, other people are against the idea. In their opinion, for one thing, Chinglish makes English more colourful. For another, Chinglish adds much pleasure to our life.
As far as I’m concerned, we should learn standard English instead of Chinglish. Only in this way can we communication with foreigners better.

試題分析：本篇寫(xiě)作題材是對(duì)中式英語(yǔ)的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；還有自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，句式多變：People have different opinions on whether we should get rid of Chinglish. 這句話有賓語(yǔ)從句， They think it is difficult for foreigners to understand those Chinglish signs.這句話用了it的形式主語(yǔ)， Chinglish makes English more colourful.這句話用的是復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)， As far as I’m concerned, 這是“就我而言”，we should learn standard English instead of Chinglish. 這句話用了instead of，Only in this way can we communication with foreigners better. 這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章用了On one hand, What’s more, However, on the other hand, for one thing,For another,這樣的起到連接作用的詞組，使文章更加連貫。