Question

假設(shè)你是李華，明年即將進(jìn)入大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是不知道怎么樣適應(yīng)大學(xué)的生活。請(qǐng)你就以下大學(xué)新生常遇到的情況給北京大學(xué)校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，尋求建議。
1. 在生活中不會(huì)照顧自己；
2. 感到孤獨(dú)，經(jīng)常想家；
3. 錢(qián)物容易丟失
4. 對(duì)食物、氣候不適應(yīng)；
5. 校外租房現(xiàn)象。
注意：
1. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 150詞左右。
Dear President,
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

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Dear President,
I’m a senior 3 student and I’m going to university next year. But I’m worried about the university life and I’m afraid I can’t adjust to the new environment. So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.
It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. They can’t take care of themselves and always feel lonely and homesick. What is more, they may sometimes lose their money, mobile phones and many other things. They even fall ill because of the new climate and food. In addition, some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.
As a pre-university student, I want to maintain a meaningful life in the university. Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?
Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。請(qǐng)你就以下大學(xué)新生常遇到的情況給北京大學(xué)校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，尋求關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活的建議。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.這句話(huà)是疑問(wèn)詞+不定式做賓語(yǔ)， It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. 這句話(huà)是it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子， some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.這句話(huà)用了定語(yǔ)從句， Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?這句話(huà)有過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)，還有范文里面還用了 What is more, In addition,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更連貫。