Question

假設(shè)你是李華，明年要去英國留學，想通過一家英國留學生機構(gòu)尋找寄宿家庭。請你寫一封電子郵件，說明你的要求：
1．房間的條件；
2．房子所處的位置和地段；
3．你喜歡的房東類型；
4．其它。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a Chinese student who is going to study in London next month. I ‘m writing to ask you for finding a host family for me. Here are my requests.
First, I’d like a room of my own, which is clean and comfortable. Second, the apartment should not be far away from the center of the city. That is to say, it is convenient for me to get around. Third, the family can speak fluent English. In addition, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers without additional charges so that I am able to wash my clothes and cook my own meals.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必須認真審題， 要求讓你寫一封信說明對寄宿家庭的要求，對房子的位置和地段以及房間的要求和房東類型都需要以第三人稱來說明。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時即可。還有就是應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接和高級詞匯的應(yīng)用，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有條理，并使用了非常好的詞語和句子為文章增色不少，比如 additional charges，It is convenient for… to do sth.; I’d appreciate it if …,以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：That is to say，In addition等等。值得學習借鑒。