Question

用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文發(fā)表你的看法。
1.目前許多商品存在過(guò)度包裝的現(xiàn)象
2.出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因
3.我對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法和建議

Answer 1

Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.
There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.
In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill.
To solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.

此文為說(shuō)明文：首先，審題：時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)槭钦f(shuō)明的現(xiàn)狀及自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。第一段：說(shuō)明許多商品存在過(guò)度包裝的這個(gè)現(xiàn)象，來(lái)引出話題。第二段：對(duì)其原因進(jìn)行分析，從廠家和消費(fèi)者雙方的角度說(shuō)明原因。第三段：說(shuō)明自己對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法。最后一段：自己的建議。針對(duì)其原因，提出有針對(duì)性的解決辦法。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
文章分為四段，分述現(xiàn)存的一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象—過(guò)度包裝、過(guò)度包裝的原因、自己的看法和改變現(xiàn)狀的建議。層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文中用到了像：phenomena，to name but a few，stimulate ,thus, mistakenly, delicate, disastrous consequences, restrict, raise one’s awareness, equal, advocate ,in my point of view等高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)，使得文章表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、地道、流暢。