Question

假如你是李華，因不能赴約去你朋友John 家共進(jìn)晚餐，因?yàn)槟銓⒚τ跍?zhǔn)備后天的一門重要考試，據(jù)此用英語寫一封致歉信。要點(diǎn)包括：
1、感謝對(duì)方邀請(qǐng) 2、遺憾地告訴對(duì)方你無法赴約并說明理由
3、祝對(duì)方度過一個(gè)愉快的時(shí)光，并另約時(shí)間聯(lián)系。
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右�？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
Dear John，
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear John,
Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。假如你是李華，因不能赴約去你朋友John 家共進(jìn)晚餐，因?yàn)槟銓⒚τ跍?zhǔn)備后天的一門重要考試，據(jù)此用英語寫一封致歉信。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. 這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句和原因狀語從句，I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. 這句話用了并列句和賓語從句，Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? 這句話用了it做形式主語，If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.這句話用了省略， I do long for a pleasant chat with you.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語動(dòng)詞。