Question

假如你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)，你們準(zhǔn)備為她舉辦歡送會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給她寫(xiě)一封不少于100詞的e-mail
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為他驕傲：
2.感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；
3.邀請(qǐng)她參加歡送會(huì)，并告知?dú)g送會(huì)相關(guān)事宜。
1）時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；
2）地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部（the Sun Club）302房間；
3）路線：在她所住賓館乘坐332路公共汽車(chē)可直達(dá)。
參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party
郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams.                           
                                                                               
                                                                               
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It's a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6：00 p．m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件，Jane在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)，寫(xiě)電子郵件邀請(qǐng)她參加歡送會(huì)。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，考生發(fā)揮的余地較小，只需要翻譯成英語(yǔ)即可，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。同時(shí)注意使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿(mǎn)變化，不要那么的死板。同時(shí)要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. 這句話(huà)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句， We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. 這句話(huà)里面的詞組be pround of和動(dòng)詞appreciate使用的很好，還有We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.這句話(huà)里面含有定語(yǔ)從句，It's a pity that you have to go back soon! 這句話(huà)里面用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)真正的主語(yǔ)從句， By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.