Question

近年來，中學(xué)生打零工變得越來越普遍。請(qǐng)你就這一現(xiàn)象結(jié)合下表，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
【寫作內(nèi)容】

現(xiàn)象	根據(jù)調(diào)查，大約有25%的中學(xué)生打零工； 在暑假，這一數(shù)字將增加到72%； 他們大多數(shù)做家教、服務(wù)員、銷售員。
原因	想賺錢支付部分的學(xué)費(fèi)； 想經(jīng)濟(jì)上獨(dú)立，買自己想買的東西。
意義	能獲得工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，拓寬視野； 能給中學(xué)生提供了解外部世界的機(jī)會(huì)。

 
【寫作要求】
1、只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。
2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
3、參考詞匯：家教tutors  經(jīng)濟(jì)上的economically
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Answer 1

According to a recent survey, about 25% of the high school students who do part-time jobs work as tutors, waiters or salesmen. Besides, this figure will increase to 75% on the summer vacation. Why they want part-time jobs is that they want to earn some money to help pay part of the high school tuition and that they hope to be economically independent and buy what they need. By doing part-time jobs, high school students can gain some work experience and broaden their outlooks. They can also get valuable chances to know about the outside world at the same time.

試題分析：考查提綱作文：考生首先要仔細(xì)審題，包括以下幾個(gè)方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時(shí)態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是提綱作文，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。因?yàn)橹荒苁褂?個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點(diǎn)，考生要多使用復(fù)雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】According to a recent survey, about 25% of the high school students who do part-time jobs work as tutors, waiters or salesmen. Besides, this figure will increase to 75% on the summer vacation. 這句話用的是定語(yǔ)從句，Why they want part-time jobs is that they want to earn some money to help pay part of the high school tuition and that they hope to be economically independent and buy what they need. 這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句和兩個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句， They can also get valuable chances to know about the outside world at the same time.這句話用了不定式做定語(yǔ)。