Question

現(xiàn)在大部分中學(xué)生沒有足夠的時間享受快樂假期。
請根據(jù)要點提示寫一篇80-100詞的短文。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
要點提示：1. 中學(xué)生要上各種補習(xí)班；
2. 家長認(rèn)為學(xué)生應(yīng)該把更多的時間用在學(xué)習(xí)上；
3. 你的想法和建議。
Nowdays, few middle school students can fully enjoy their holidays ______________________

Answer 1

 
One possible version:
Nowdays, few middle school students can fully enjoy their holidays.
Parents believe the more time children spend on books, the better they will do at school. So they ask them to attend different kinds of extra classes.
In my opinion, students should take enough rest, and make better use of their holidays to practise their hobbies.
As we all know, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Although the knowledge in textbooks is important, it is not enough. Students also need to learn some useful things outside school.
In a word, it is necessary for students to have enough free time.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時。要求讓你針對中學(xué)生要上各種補習(xí)班，家長認(rèn)為學(xué)生應(yīng)該把更多的時間用在學(xué)習(xí)上等談?wù)勀愕南敕ê徒ㄗh。因此本文 不止用一種人稱。還應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。還需要注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如make better use of，need to; 還運用了the more, the more句式; 和All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.名句。并注意了句子的銜接如：In  my opinion，In a word等等。