Question

用英語寫一篇題為 “Top Meal of the Day”的短文。

原因	晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，不吃早飯可多睡一會(huì)。家長(zhǎng)太忙，給錢讓孩子自己解決。有些女孩子為保持苗條身材不吃早餐。
結(jié)果	課堂上睡覺。注意力下降�？荚嚦煽�(jī)不理想。
建議	早餐不可少，提供全天所需能量的30％，有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：120左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.不要逐字翻譯，要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
3.參考詞匯：苗條的slim
Top Meal of the Day
A recent survey shows that nearly 30% of the students in our school do not have breakfast
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Answer 1

Top Meal of the Day
A recent study shows that nearly 50 percent of the school "kids in Beijing do not have breakfast.They tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test.Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them. In addition, a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast.
In fact, the morning meal plays an important part. It can provide 30 percent of the whole day’s energy. For a creative mind and better judgment, school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這篇文章的話題是“Top Meal of the Day”，提綱是以表格的形式給出的，寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說明】They tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of test.這句話有賓語從句和it做形式主語的句型， Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. 這句話用了定語從句和so that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句，Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them. 這句話用了原因狀語從句和too…to….句型， the morning meal plays an important part.這句話用了詞組“play an important role in”，這篇文章還使用了 In addition, In fact,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。