Question

高中生活已經(jīng)開始，你將面對新的學習和生活環(huán)境。請你以李華的名義給你的初中老師寫一封信，談?wù)勀愦蛩闳绾伟才拍愕母咧猩�活。�?nèi)容要點應(yīng)包括：
1. 確定新的學習目標             2. 改進學習方法
3. 學會獨立生活                 4. 參加各種課外活動
5. 處理好與同學的關(guān)系
注意：1. 短文內(nèi)容要連貫、完整       2. 詞數(shù)：100左右
My dear teacher,                                                                         
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
My dear teacher,
I have been in senior high school for a month. After I enter senior high, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I’ll take part in different school activities, for example, I’ll often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers. I think I will have a wonderful life in my new school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一篇書信應(yīng)用文。文章給出了簡單的漢語提示，要求學生能夠連貫的將內(nèi)容表達出來。成文時應(yīng)注意：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全：（1）確定新的學習目標；（2）改進學習方法；（3）學會獨立生活；（4）參加各種課外活動；（5）處理好與同學的關(guān)系。2.人稱：采用第一人稱；3.時態(tài)：將來時為主；4.恰當使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型；5.使用一些連詞和插入語使文章表達自然，流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了插入語：What’s more, for example, In my spare time, In addition,等；使用了從句：After I enter senior high, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning； as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own；  I think I will have a wonderful life in my new school.