Question

一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
它是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；
家人團(tuán)聚；
賞月、吃月餅、
還有旅游、訪友等其他活動(dòng)。
注意：
詞數(shù)100左右；
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使用文連貫；
開頭語(yǔ)已您寫好，不講總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：
中秋節(jié):the Mid-Autumn Festival             農(nóng)歷: lunar calendar
賞月: enjoy the full moon                  月餅: moon cake
The Mid- Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15^th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar

Answer 1

The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices, such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

試題分析：本題是提綱類作文，文體是說(shuō)明文。話題是中秋節(jié)，材料已給出，考生應(yīng)該不難理解寫作內(nèi)容和寫作目的，且文章的題目和首句已給出，關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. 這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句，With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices, such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.這句話用了in addition to除了，使文章更加連貫。