Question

假如你是李華，是某中學高三學生。擬合其他一些學生將前往澳大利亞進行交流活動，你被安排在Jones家寄宿。請你用英語向Jones寫一封信，介紹自己的一些情況，要點如下：
1）自我介紹、家庭情況；2）告訴他們你的生活習慣；
3）你的心愿
注意：
1）可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
2）詞數(shù)120--150左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)。
Dear Mr Jones,
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Jones,
My name is Jiang Ming, a senior 3 student from Shandong Province. There are four people in my family---my father, a postman, my mother, a nurse, my twin brother and me. We love each other and live a happy life.
I like pets, such as dogs, cats and so on, so it's OK for me if your family keeps some pets. I don't smoke but I don't mind if anybody smokes. Besides, I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I'm not particular about fooD.What's more, I'm in good health and don't take any medicine. I’m also a sports fan and take exercise outdoors.
I believe that I will have a good time during my stay in your home because I have been told that your family are friendly and kinD.I also believe that I can learn a lot about your culture and improve my English.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。你被安排在Jones家寄宿。請你用英語向Jones寫一封信，介紹自己的一些情況，要點都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細節(jié)，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點說明】I don't smoke but I don't mind if anybody smokes. 這句話用了賓語從句，I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I'm not particular about food.這句話有be particular about這個詞組， I'm in good health and don't take any medicine. 這句話用了be in good health健康良好， I believe that I will have a good time during my stay in your home because I have been told that your family are friendly and kind.這句話有賓語從句，原因狀語從句，文章還使用了一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞， Besides, What's more, 使文章更加連貫。