Question

假設(shè)你是紅光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李明，上周在學(xué)校舉辦的英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文：
參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；2、堅(jiān)持寫英語(yǔ)日記的作用；3、英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（EnjoyReading）對(duì)你的幫助。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：不少于100；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。3. 文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)算在總詞匯中。
My name Liming , a student from HongGuang Middle School.                               
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

Answer 1

One possible version
My name Liming,a student from HongGuang Middle School. I got the first place in the English Speech Contest，which was held by our school not long ago. Here I feel delighted to share my experience in learning English with you.
Firstly, I think, taking part in English Corners is of great help to improve my speaking and listening. So whenever there is an opportunity,I willgrasp it and motivated my interest to study English.
Secondly, I keep on writing English diaries，which enables me to express what happens in my daily life and in this way I can practice my written English.
Thirdly, what interests me most is to surf English Reading on the Internet . As we all know , we need extensive reading to broaden our horizons , so it is a better way to develop a good habit of reading English materials every day.
In conclusion, Rome was not built in a day .Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類寫作。文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示，話題是與英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，貼近學(xué)生生活，讓學(xué)生有話可寫。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1、內(nèi)容要齊全：（1）參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；（2）堅(jiān)持寫英語(yǔ)日記的作用；（3）英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（EnjoyReading）對(duì)你的幫助。2、人稱：第一人稱；3、時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4、使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型；5、恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)使文章自然、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】使用了高級(jí)句型：I got the first place in the English Speech Contest，which was held by our school not long ago. whenever there is an opportunity,I willgrasp it and motivated my interest to study English. I keep on writing English diaries，which enables me to express what happens in my daily life and in this way I can practice my written English. 倒裝句：Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal. 使用不定式句型：it is a better way to develop a good habit of reading English materials every day. 短語(yǔ)：taking part in；keep on；got the first place；stick to