Question

假設(shè)你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李軍，你和在北京上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Jack約好下周末去上海旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件：
1.表示歉意； 2. 解釋原因；3. 另約時(shí)間。
                                                                                             
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                               
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Shanghai with you next week, which I have promised. I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.
Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.  I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jun

試題分析：本題是書(shū)信類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件，因?yàn)椴荒芨凹s向杰克表示歉意；解釋原因；還有另約時(shí)間。材料已給出，寫作的時(shí)候關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。還要有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗�同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Shanghai with you next week, which I have promised.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句， I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai. 這句話用了動(dòng)名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.這句話用了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)。