Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
There are many factors(因素) that determine your success, of which a good habit is a key one. What are good habits in your eyes? What influence do they have on you?
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)； ②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和和名稱(chēng)；    ④詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

Good habits are of great importance in our life. Different people hold different beliefs on the topic. For me, a student, good habits mean being careful with and devoted to study, and trying to avoid any mistakes and unfavorable things.
When in Grade One, I was terribly poor in my studies. Addicted to playing computer games, I often stayed up too late. It came as no surprise that I couldn’t’ always concentrate in class. Not until I failed the final examination did I begin to regret how much precious time I had wasted. Luckily, my head teacher offered me his timely help. He talked me into quitting the game addiction. From then on, I spared no effort to work hard at all my subjects, thus making steady progress.
The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. Faced with great challenges and heavy study load, we must focus on our studies. Only in this way can we be admitted to a good university.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中出現(xiàn)了一些高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：of great importance很重要，be devoted to 致力于，offer sb sth提供某人某物 talk sb into doing說(shuō)服某人做, drawing near.臨近，還有復(fù)雜的多變的句型：When in Grade One, I was terribly poor in my studies. 這句話是省略句，Addicted to playing computer games, I often stayed up too late. 這句話是過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)，It came as no surprise that I couldn’t’ always concentrate in class. 這句話是it做形式主語(yǔ)，Not until I failed the final examination did I begin to regret how much precious time I had wasted.這句話是倒裝句， I spared no effort to work hard at all my subjects, thus making steady progress.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，F(xiàn)aced with great challenges and heavy study load, we must focus on our studies.這句話是過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Only in this way can we be admitted to a good university.這句話是倒裝句。