Question

假定你是李華，你的英朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫回信。
要點(diǎn)：1．參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；
2．看中文書刊、電視；
3．學(xué)唱中文歌曲；
4．交中國朋友。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭及結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
June 8,2013
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
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Best wishes,
Li Hua

Answer 1

June 8,2013
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
Here are a few suggestions．First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．
Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．You can make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
Try and write to me in Chinese next time．
Best wishes,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求給你的朋友Peter回信介紹如何才能學(xué)好中文。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。
【亮點(diǎn)說明I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定語， it is important to take a Chinese course,as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．這句話用it做形式主語和原因狀語從句， it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．這句話用了狀語從句的省略，還有文章還使用了First, Then,Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。