Question

“目標”在人們成長的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高三尤為重要。請你結合自身實際，按以下提示，準備一篇英語發(fā)言稿，在英語課上與同學們作交流。
目標的重要性；
如何設立目標；
談談你的近期目標；
如何實現(xiàn)你的目標。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
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Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you! 

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
There is no denying that goals are important especially for seniors because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for. With a clear direction you will straightly get what you want.
In my view, goals are not difficult to set. First, you should make clear what you really want. What’s more, it’s essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step.
My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.
To achieve this, not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life. (127)
Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you!

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，主要讓學生以“目標在人們成長的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高三尤為重要”為主題展開敘述，內容應從包括以下四個方面來：一 ：目標的重要性。二：如何設立目標。三：談談你的近期目標。四：如何實現(xiàn)你的目標。
【亮點說明】
文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如head for 朝…走，you will straightly get what you want你將直接得到你想要的東西（what引導的名詞性從句），My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.（so that 引導的目的狀語從句）not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.（notonly…but also 引導的并列句，且位于句首構成了倒裝句，并且主語了句子的銜接如：What’s more，In my view等。