Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你從報(bào)紙上看到廣告說A公司的平面設(shè)計(jì)部門正在招收實(shí)習(xí)生。請(qǐng)寫一份求職電子郵件，介紹你的基本情況（高二學(xué)生，暑期曾在廣告公司打工，有平面設(shè)計(jì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，愛好攝影，性格外向，有合作精神），并請(qǐng)求對(duì)方將具體資料發(fā)送到你的電子信箱。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100字左右。文章開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2 可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)使文章完整。
參考詞匯：實(shí)習(xí)生: intern    ; 平面設(shè)計(jì): graphic design

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
From your advertisement in the newspaper, I have learned that your graphic design department is in need of interns. The job description sounds interesting and it is the kind of work I have wanted to do for quite a long time.
My name is Li Hua and I am a Senior Two student. During the past vacations, I took a part-time job in an advertisement company so I had some experience in graphic design. I take pleasure in photography during my spare time and I am outgoing . Besides, you will find out that I am a team player.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the job.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours ,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：要求寫一份求職電子郵件，介紹你的基本情況，考生分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 From your advertisement in the newspaper, I have learned that your graphic design department is in need of interns. 這句話用了in need of這個(gè)詞組，The job description sounds interesting and it is the kind of work I have wanted to do for quite a long time. 這句話有定語(yǔ)從句， During the past vacations, I took a part-time job in
an advertisement company so I had some experience in graphic design.這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句， you will find out that I am a team player.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句，I am looking forward to hearing from you.這句話用了動(dòng)名詞。還有文章還用了Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。,