Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，目前很多人給親朋好友發(fā)電子賀卡。請根據(jù)以下提示，闡述電子賀卡的優(yōu)越性。
1．可播放動(dòng)畫和聲音；
2．傳遞速度快。
3．形式多樣，還可自己設(shè)計(jì)。
4．有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境。
注意：文章包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯。
詞數(shù)：100—120字
參考詞匯：電子賀卡：electronic card;     動(dòng)畫：animation

Answer 1

With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones.
Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations. Besides, it’s faster to send an electronic card. There are many websites on line where different varieties of cards are available.
If none of these cards are of any interest to you, you can design cards of unique style using flash or other software. More importantly, with the popularity of electronic cards, less paper is used for making paper cards, which contributes to the environment protection.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文。所給要點(diǎn)教為仔細(xì)，所運(yùn)用的詞匯也都是考生所熟悉的。談?wù)摰脑掝}是電子賀卡的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。務(wù)必要注意使用合適的連接詞連接各要點(diǎn)。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文中有一些高級(jí)詞組如Compared with…與…相比；different varieties of….各種各樣的；contribute to導(dǎo)致，通向…；也有一些好的連接詞，如Besides，More importantly。也運(yùn)用了高級(jí)句式如非限制性定語從句which contributes to the environment protection。