Question

中國(guó)人不善于向家人表達(dá)“愛”，但你認(rèn)為告訴家人你愛他們很重要。請(qǐng)以“Ways to express love to my family”為題，寫出如何向家人表達(dá)“愛”。
提示：1．如果父母生日，當(dāng)面向他們說“我愛你們”‘
2．經(jīng)常幫助家人做家務(wù)；
3．經(jīng)常擁抱父母；
4．你自己的看法。
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Ways to express love to my family
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Answer 1

There are various ways to express love. I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them.
I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do, especially when they are tired after work, my parents must feel my love to them .
Besides, I will often give my parents a hug because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other, which does good to their health.
Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do so on some special days.

試題分析：本文是一篇說明文。文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語提示，文章話題貼近學(xué)生生活，讓他們有話可說。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全；（1）如果父母生日，當(dāng)面向他們說“我愛你們”（2）經(jīng)常幫助家人做家務(wù)；（3）經(jīng)常擁抱父母；（4）你自己的看法。2.人稱：第一人稱為主；3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】使用了從句：1.I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do , especially when they are tired after work , my parents must feel my love to them . 2. because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other , which does good to their health .使用了動(dòng)名詞短語：Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved 使用了插入語：Besides