Question

假設(shè)你是張明，你的英國老師Mr. Smith要求你們明天下午去聽一個(gè)英國歷史的講座。你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一封短信向Mr. Smith請(qǐng)假。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：*表示歉意
*理由：去機(jī)場(chǎng)接人
*詢問：是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽講座
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右
2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear Mr. Smith,
                                                                           
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Yours sincerely
Zhang Ming

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am so sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on British history, which is to be given tomorrow afternoon. My best friend is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in British society and history. I wonder if it is possible for you to record the lecture, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Yours sincerely
Zhang Ming

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。請(qǐng)你以張明的身份給你的英國老師Mr. Smith寫一封短信請(qǐng)假條。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】I am so sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on British history, which is to be given tomorrow afternoon. 這句話里面有非限制性定語從句， I wonder if it is possible for you to record the lecture, and if so, could I borrow the tape? 這句話有it做形式主語，和賓語從句，It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.這句話用了賓語從句。