Question

假設(shè)今年暑假你將去參加學(xué)校組織的夏令營活動。學(xué)校組織你們?nèi)ビ�國倫敦�?br />活動內(nèi)容：
1.與那兒的中學(xué)老師和學(xué)生交流，了解他們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；
2.參觀大英博物館，了解當(dāng)?shù)氐臍v史和文化；去英國家庭就餐，學(xué)做甜品（dessert），以便于回國后與家人、朋友分享；
3.去英國的農(nóng)村，感受大自然。
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只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。
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Answer 1

This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. We will have a visit to the British Museum to learn about its local culture and history. We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China. In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery.

試題分析：考查提綱作文：考生首先要仔細(xì)審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是提綱作文，要點需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要多使用復(fù)雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。
【亮點說明】This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. 這句話用的是過去分詞做定語，We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. 這句話是目的狀語從句，We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China.這句話用的是非限制性定語從句，In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery. 這句話是用可現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語。