Question

前不久，學校剛剛舉辦過校園十佳歌手大賽，該活動得到了學校領導的支持,并深受同學們的廣泛歡迎。許多同學都親自去聆聽了歌手們的演唱，想必心中一定有了自己崇拜的偶像。請以The basic quality of a good singer為題，根據(jù)你對音樂及演唱技巧的理解，對此次歌手大賽做一個大體描述與總體評價。
注意：總詞數(shù)不超過120詞。
提示詞匯：Top Ten of singing competition 十佳歌手大賽 n.
Support 支持    n./v.
Be popular with 受……歡迎 v
Adore v. 崇拜
idol偶像    n.
technique/ skill 技巧 n.
Live show 現(xiàn)場秀
Emotion 感情n.
Melody n. 旋律
Rhythm n. 節(jié)奏

Answer 1

The basic quality of a good singer
Recently, a competition about the top 10 school singers was held in our school.The competition was supported by the school,and was popular with many students,who went to listen to the singers.There was no doubt that they adored their idols.
In my opinion, there must be some techniques/ skills in singing.First of all,the singers must have the ability to perform in Live show,where they can show their singing skills fully.Secondly,while singing,they should put their emotion in it,and follow the Melody and Rhythm
In conclusion,the competition is a great success.It is bound to arouse the students’ interest in music and enrich our school life.

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