Question

根據(jù)調(diào)查，每次考試時總有些同學(xué)出現(xiàn)頭暈、乏力、睡眠不足和食欲不振等“緊張情緒”。請你用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一下你是如何對待考試及如何克服考試緊張情緒的。
短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1、平時努力學(xué)習(xí)，正確對待考試；
2、考前適當(dāng)運動，正常作息；
3、睡前洗個熱水澡、喝杯熱牛奶有助于睡眠。
注意：1、文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；
2、詞數(shù)：100左右。
How to overcome the pressure of exams
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Answer 1

As we all know, most of us middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. There is no doubt that exams are important to us students, but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them. As a matter of fact, exams are no more than a means of evaluating, therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results. Only studying hard very day and making good preparations for exams can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam, A hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed might help you have a sound sleep.
So, my suggestion is: don’t worry about exams, try to relax yourself.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。如范文的Only by studying hard very day and making good preparations for exams can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.用的是部分倒裝句。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。